Insanity sanctioned
psychotic thoughts' worship,
practical religion,
surging through veins
like hunger rumbling
train of stomach
for a baa- baa.
Author notes
baa- baa, what a baby says when he/she wants a bottle. lol
A contest entry
- Quickie, 15 minutes, 10 entries, 20 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended July 3, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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lol
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what a nut!!!
goo't one!
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OMG!!
Psychotic thoughts worship
You have me cracking up
Loved this one
Best wishes to You in the contest
Many blessings too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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lol I really have no idea where that came from.. it just CAME.
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i was gonna ask about the baa baa, then i read the notes lol. great one, really the baa baa kicked it so well.
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ROFL That's exactly why I put that in the authors notes.
Thanks!
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excellent take on the prompt, loved the baa-baa and after too many baa-baa's go sleepy bye. lol
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lol Thanks
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Creative piece you've written for this prompt. Terrific. Loved "baa-baa"...definitely what a baby says.
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Your Prompt is:"I need a lobotomy or a bottle in front of me!"
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Good luck.
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