Nurse, NURSE!
I've been calling for ages,
Weak bladder,
written in my file!
These wet sheets,
feel like the Nile.
Author notes
prompt = I need a lobotomy or a bottle in front of me
A contest entry
- Quickie, 15 minutes, 10 entries, 20 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended July 3, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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that's hilarious!
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a quickie alright...lmao great short short short! write
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haha, cute. nice job
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lol cute
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LMAO
~Lori ♥
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Haha, good one here mister
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lol, Denial is a river in Egypt, loved the take on the prompt. Hugs, Bunny
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Hilarious! Great job indeed. Loved the last part. I could definitely imagine this. Oh, gosh, my sides hurt from laughing.
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Your Prompt is:"I need a lobotomy or a bottle in front of me!"
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Good luck.
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