Ten, fifteen, twenty
word quickies
suck cells
out of me;
shock treatments, prescriptions?
Scientist told
instead brain transplant-
Jell-O mold.
Author notes
Prompt:
"I need a lobotomy or at a bottle in front of me!"
Twenty words...
In a list
A contest entry
- Quickie, 15 minutes, 10 entries, 20 Words. Beat The Clock! by Cupcrazy.
450 points, ended July 3, 2007, 8 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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LOL you are not right
Loved to see the humor in your work, awesomely Gold!! ha! ~Tia
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That was really good, a brain transplant huh?
I like the shick treatment prescription that was good.
excellent poem for the prompt.
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Absolutely Brilliant...Congrats on the Gold...
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Jell-O mold is right and they do suck brain cell out of me. I see why this won gold.
Love,
Amera ♥
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Oooh
Congrats precious. This was great.
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Ain't it the truth!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Whew! After that one I definitely fit the mold.
This was so clever and enjoyable for all of us!
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LOL! Congratulations, Desire. Hilarious and clever expressions of what we junkies all feel. Bravo!
Bella
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lol, too funny...see you got over the hosting phobia good for you. this is great, made me laugh.
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This is just fab, loved it
jelly molds, lol
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Ha. Ha. Great job. Fit really well. Yeah. Me too. Soon I'll be asking: What's a brain? Great job!
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LOL!!!!!! I couldn't help but laugh at this! This is great! And sometimes I think you may be right!! Best of luck in this contest!!
and much love
Nettie
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KEWL
Cute and well done. Great word choice and crafting from the prompt. Great Job.
*Go with God* my friend,
Valerie
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Your Prompt is:"I need a lobotomy or a bottle in front of me!"
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Best of luck.
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