folds of hidden flesh,
defined
in cloak of reasons;
rented rhyme
as Monk to murmur prayers
past, for penance paid
where weave of cloth,
is deftly laid
A contest entry
- Intelligent people only by masterblaster.
450 points, ended July 3, 2007, 10 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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An interesting write.
Lady Dragonwyck
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Wonderful!
Love the rhyme~
Beautiful verse You have penned my Friend!
Wonderful piece!
Congratulations on Your Trophy win!!
Many blessings to You
Best wishes too
and much love~ Desire~*~
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Awesomely intriging...this wonder to spin...in golden threads....
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This poem is worth several readings to uncover the subtle meanings behind each word. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz
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Excellent job here. I think you will do well with this. Best of luck.
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This is lovely it sent shivers down my spine,
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