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sight of life

 

in sweltered heat

of thunders calling

 

i share such subtle

essence etched

 

in drop

of plaster pelting,

pummeled perfume

starched,

in tender stretch of thirst

 

to sop in sweeter sound

of swallow, seasons stunning

session stormed

 

as sight of light

in distant channel's

char to curve,

a newer nuance

 

liquid lightning lipped as life

 

 

 

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  • poetsruletheworld
    July 17, 2007
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    This is a beautiful write.


  • omega13
    July 12, 2007
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    very cool


  • Beating gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    This is very short, and I definitely think you could add some more to it. Tell some more.
    I do like the wording though, and how you say "as sight of light / in distant channel's". Really like that!