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Orbiting Wonder

Missing image


I saw your face
dream where beauty mirrors
mind to circle

around your head,
magic thoughts craving like,

internal combustion
to feather in awe,

wrapped,
in camouflaged eyes

orbiting wonder.


A contest entry

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  • Night Hope gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    "wrapped,
    in camouflaged eyes

    orbiting wonder."

    Another intelligent, thought~provoking piece from your infinitely talented quill, my Friend...Congrats on your silver, Rich...Di has impeccable taste, you know... Wanda


  • Desire gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    Wonderful!!

    Wonderful images You have brought forth and
    love the phrase camouflaged eyes
    with magic thoughts!!
    Congratulations on Your Trophy my Friend
    Many blessings to You
    Best wishes too
    and much love~ Desire~*~


  • Tangled Angle
    July 3, 2007
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    Excellent job here Rich. I think you just hit a home run. lol Good luck.


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    July 3, 2007

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    Another beautiful entry. I dream of finding the poetic images that you and Di seem to discover so effortlessly. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz


  • wolfspiritguide gold member
    July 3, 2007
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    wonderful take on the promt.


  • masterblaster gold member
    July 3, 2007
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    I knew you would write something special, love how you used the word,

  • masterblaster gold member
    July 3, 2007
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    prompt is up

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