Troubled teen
against society
suddenly struck
by enigmatic epiphanies.
No influence around,
besides Man in the clouds;
Escapist
and his bardocucullus
covering compunctious past’s
back
while living
in religious masquerade.
A contest entry
- Intelligent people only by masterblaster.
450 points, ended July 3, 2007, 10 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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there is so much depth to this...great write.
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You have captured so much in this brief poem; angst, religious hypocrisy, teenage mores. This is very well done and an excellent use of the prompt. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz
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Thanks
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Hi, good write, not going to be easy to judge this comp,
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Thanks.
lol Good luck with judging.. there are some great writers here.
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prompt is up
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