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Empty Field of Dreams





If I were to give to you my all
my everything
that which makes me
Me.


What would I have left to sustain myself?


Would you give your self to me,
or just take what's freely given.

Slipping away quietly
like that well known thief in the dark?

You are my whole,
but what am I to you?




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  • tara wilson gold member
    July 10, 2007

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    you feel emptiness in the half you are to the other person...I like this...made me think...thank you for this entry')