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borrowed season

 

shy of life,

promised full

 

crease of whorl

as hair in twirl

twined on finger,

thought confined

 

minded reason, sworn secure

lost as bark

softly sloughed

in wave of treason

 

sorrowed end

to borrowed season

 

 

 

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driftwood

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  • Nicolette gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    Lovely personification of melancholy and sadness here...cast aside, a sorrowed end like a piece of driftwood. A lovely poem with great word-economy, so softly placed here upon this page.

    Thank you for posting it in my contest.

    ~ Nicolette


  • kaibab silver member
    July 3, 2007
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    Melancholy meandering water's wish for love...sadly beautiful friend...