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Note to a Ghost



Just because we are now strangers in their eyes does not mean I no longer see you.I still pick you out of a crowd. My senses tingle and my heart beats faster. It's uncontrollable. It's now an instict. I guess it's something that you end up with when you've been so close to someone, but I'm still fairly new to all of this. I still recognize your voice above all others but I do not hear you and you do not hear me. I can still feel your warmth if you are near. I can still tell when you're having a bad day. I can still remember your likes and dislikes. I'm still aware of you but I do not awknoledge you. If you were to come to me broken I would comfort you. If you were to come to me wild I would tame you. If you were to come to me needing I would give...but you don't know that. Though, we are no longer lovers I still love you and you will always have a place in my heart. I doubt I will ever not be able to sense you. So, I suppose it is best to stay far apart because that's what's easy.

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This is fiction not really anything I'm going through right now. In the past? Yes.

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  • Shadow Recon
    July 11, 2007
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    I like it, it's...interesting..