Candy,
a delicacy
to many sweet teeth,
sugar, supreme ingredient.
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I personally used to LOVE sugar!!! But now that I have my braces, I've grown to just think it's okay because I'm not allowed to have it as much, so I've grown apart from it
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A contest entry
- 10/10/10 by Kari.
300 points, ended July 3, 2007, 9 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Very sweet write. Can'y go wrong with sugar.
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lol aw I had my braces a long time ago and I can so relate to this right here
I wish you the best of luck in the contest 
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That happens... I know the feeling. I still eat it sometimes.. but it hurts my teeth..(probably where all the cavities came from in the first place!! LOL) But I rarely eat it anymore..would rather have a nice juicy plum or some yummy grapes!! This was a cute poem. Good luck!!
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makes me want some candy. Too bad I don't eat it anymore... I like this one. Nice write
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Mmm...I love this. Great poem. Made me hungry...and I'm supposed to be on a diet. Great! Just great!
I love candy...and I love this poem. Good luck.
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