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Unconcealed love

Love is undoubtedly hard to conceal,
it's something we all can't help but feel,
even the smallest smile will show,
that you love that person, and want to let them know.
But sometimes you're heart breaks deep inside,
you reach for a person you're inevitably denied,
when the true friend is right beside you,
ready to help you see the day through.

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  • HollyLouise
    February 10, 2009

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    beautiful

    Meg this poem is so beautiful and so true, you write so well. it fits perfectly together, each line linking like they have always belonged.

    Keep writing,
    Holly.