Bruises litter my body
Cuts and gashes close by
Sticky and cold
Blood saps to my skin
Another blow to my gut
I cry out in pain
Too weak to fight back
He laughs above me
Hitting me again with a hammer
Shattering my already broken leg
A shot rings in my ears
The alarm clock beeps
My eyes flash open
Author notes
Option 5
A contest entry
- Options..Options..Options by fallenangel671.
1200 points, ended July 13, 2007, 52 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Hoodwinked
Depressing again but oddly a sort of happy ending. Nice write sad but nice write. Great imagery and emotions spread throughout the piece. Great job keep it up. Enjoy your day in the spotlight.
Never give up
Kate -
Ouch that dream sounds kind of painfull anyway great write .
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Hood-Wink!
What a horrible nightmare!! I felt like I was right there watching. Excellent imagery and emotions.
You have just been Hood-Winked, enjoy
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Hood ~Wink ~
Very dark write~ well posed ~ definately feel it! -
wow...this sounds like you have this dream often, but yet its still an awesome write..amazing actually i loved this
good luck in the contest
keep writing
~Ashley~<3 -
Wow..i get it it really works it makes me think of my reacurring dream
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Woah, this is spooky!
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