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Midnight Dance (song)

(v1)
Your face, like the breeze
touches my lips.
You rock with me
as the earthquake shakes
the mighty mountain tops.
As we dance, the moonlight
caresses our every motion.

(chorus)
And we are less sober in life
with every drink
of each others eyes we take

(v2)
So naive is our love.
As a childhood sweetheart's
innocence is all thats known.
In each others arms we sleep
and dream of the future
Not as a separate people
but as a holy matrimony of one.

(chorus)

(bridge)
So we dance
entangled in a love
drenched in lust.

(chorus)

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June 7, 2007

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  • Sandygram silver member
    July 29, 2007

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    Lovely Poem!!!

    Hello Gracie, I am so glad you are writing again. And that your faith in God is growing ever stronger. This was a beautiful poem to read. Thank you for sharing. Keep writing!! Love, Mom


  • ImmortalTreason
    July 3, 2007
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    i love this you wrote it so well