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Wings of Freedom

Have you ever dreamt of wings
Sprouting from your back
Rising above the pain
Everything horrible left behind
You are-
Alive

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  • skye101
    July 3, 2007
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    great write


  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Yes - both metaphorically & in a real dream.
    There's a powerful magic in this poem; in just a few words you've expressed mountains of feeling.
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.