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Choked Tears

Have you ever started to cry
Choking on your tears
Before they have the chance
Of releasing themselves-
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  • Anjole-Of-The-Artz
    July 15, 2007
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    oy

    I wanted to cry after reading this. I've had a rough night full of crying and choking on tears. <3


  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    A beautiful, potent piece you have here. Gorgeous flow. Your words are full of meaning and feeling; I know the feeling all too well...
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.