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Boiled Eggs

Blast me back to the time,
of lacrosse matches,
of jolly hockey sticks,
of tea parties,
of long dresses and corsets,
of midnight feasts,
For here in this modern world,
I do not belong.

I yearn for the time,
when girls were admired,
for their good manners and courage,
Respected for their intelligence,
Instead I am stuck in a time,
Where the admired are rude,
loud and obnoxious,
Where the respected smoke,
and take drugs,
Here it is "cool" to fail exams,
Intelligence is scorned,
Here- I do not belong.

Take me back to the era,
of Enid Blyton books,
To a place where,
I do belong.

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Option D
5) Write about a time you wish you were in; why do you want to be in that time? Why do you not want to be in this time? What is going through your mind when you imagine being there?

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  • Kimojuno
    July 12, 2007
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    A place where all is known, where all is right, where respect is earned - not given. A time where all remain as nice until the time they no longer are, a time where love is known and cool is a temperature, a time where intelligence is more then a coke. 'nough said, good write and I enjoyed it -- thank you for entering!