My emptiness is an unfulfillable void
Like writing on paper with invisible ink
knowing that it's there, but not seeing it
Being able to touch it, but not feel it
Wondering what purpose it serves
When you look at the paper and its
void of words...
A contest entry
- What is your emptiness? by tara wilson.
900 points, ended July 13, 2007, 22 entries
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Please tell me what you think
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so very well done here a metaphor to ink and paper that speaks to a certain kind of emptiness, something that exists but in another sense does not...so very creative...PK
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I really feel your emptiness here...and it provides some great imagery too, it is very clear to me ...sorry for the pun
thank you for your entry
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I appreciate your comments and thank you again for making me think about what I was writing. onesugar
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very poetic and creative write and title i see you have a no ending drive when it comes to writing and competing in contest i have gave up on contest the rules piss me off lol in some of the contest so i rather give them but i think this is a oscar its to creative not to be awarded its creative writing from a great artist
~ lady enthralling ~
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Thank you for this but I actually struggled with this.
I always appreciate your comments. Hugs xx
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