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Angel from Above

The most precious gift,
the most beautiful thing,
with her big bright eyes,
that gorgeous smile of hers,
and silky soft hair,
the angel that saved me,
from a life of hell,
a life of destruction,
the tiny baby,
that i hold in my arms,
as tears fall from my eyes,
as i asked myself why,
she was gave to me,
just what deed did i do,
to have this angel,
i have a new fresh start,
something to live for,
a very little girl,
that keeps me in line,
a whole new change,
a whole new life,
a much better life,
much happier,
with the love of my daughter,
Melaine Nikole Robinson.

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  • beautyamoungblades
    July 5, 2007

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    this is so cute and expresses so much and i know exactley how u feel everyday with my kids are blessings above

  • Darkbabe
    July 3, 2007

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    you know i love my baby cousin. Im living with my dad now so i can come see you. but i hope you and ronnie are happy. by the way everyone.....SHE IS A DOLL. i was there when she was born.


  • MlilAngel
    July 3, 2007

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    awwww

    ^-^ That's touching & simply too cute! I really like the visual aid that you give in this piece. It's very good!

    *MJ*


  • without the night
    July 3, 2007
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    wow the power of children


  • PuRfekly-Phlaw3d
    July 3, 2007
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    i like this one....


  • bloved
    July 3, 2007
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    This is really sweet...congrats on the new bundle of joy


  • blondo1990
    July 3, 2007
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    beautiful

    i loved it. so sweet i bet you baby is going to be a great adventure for you awsome!

  • xXmiranda-maeXx
    July 3, 2007
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    such a beautiful poem i love it


  • Decorus Somnium
    July 3, 2007
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    This is such a sweet, beautiful...AMAZING poem. I love it. Great job.
    Keep writing and God Bless


  • Transcend All
    July 3, 2007

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    Transcend All

    Beautiful !! I wish for a moment that my sister felt that when she looked in Boo's eyes that day she was brought into our lives. In the delivery room I saw her come out so helpless yet strong. She had wedged herself in and didn't want to come out, I know she felt that my sister wasn't ready yet. Boo and I are like mother and daughter, and now that she has gone back to live with my sister, I miss her terrible. I lover your writing. Brovao


  • jess09stevenson
    July 3, 2007
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    good job

    oo i like this.....

  • Xx-Erin-xX
    July 3, 2007

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    Nice poem. I liked it. Keep it up. Is she here? Your author page says you're at 6 months and this sound like she is already here.

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