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Is there something
you don’t know
?

Is there something
I should tell you
?

Slight inclines, steep cliffs
To be honest, I’m not
much a climber

I find
sudden drop-offs
quite
intimidating

And to imagine,
how high the mountain seems
to those who have
just climbed ranges

So tell me the view
is worth my bloody feet
Or tell me the fall
will only break
half my bones

(At least I’m not
afraid of heights)

Please tell me what you think

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  • xsuckerface
    July 3, 2007

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    This is a pretty chill poem. Seems like its about being afraid of trying.. but more. I like the second to last stanza.. seems like you could have said a lot more about whatever this is really about. I dont know. You tell me.