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I'm Drummin' On My Seats

trust in my words
businessmen late night on their laptops
tired faces in one direction

trust in my words

overheard cell phone conversations
yes I forgot to brush the cat
I’m not saying I didn’t
and we’re arriving Hillsdale
did I mention?
are we moving

block out your ears and
look away from everyone else
pretend this train is your own
(it’s what everyone else is doing)

I don’t trust in my words
but
Belmont is next

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  • xsuckerface
    November 17, 2007

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    mm thats so caltrain.. i like for nostalgic reasons as i a in italy right now far far from that. i love how you write about your surroundings often.