Darling do you believe you are indestructable ?
with your pretty little boys
that you like to call "friends"
thier prying eyes undressing you
before there hands even begin to
Your pretty little facade doesn't fool me
and your eyes laced with fake are clear
your life revolves around pretty little hotel rooms
& cheap sex with over intoxicated
((& over age))
fools in skinny jeans
there just as clueless as you baby
((can't they see the scars??))
Try to blame it all on me
I was your true love♥♥
r
i
g
h
t ??
the lies scarred my ♥ alot more
((yours is just a tad bruised))
go & whisper another intoxicating lie into my ear
i wont give in that easily baby
Darling heres a news flash
to stun your pretty little senses
i could make
break
shatter & bruise you
with the technicolor truth you don't see
but baby i like to see you lost
((i'm in a neon wonderland))
& your nothing but an actor to me
Until the next back seat romance
the next Methanephetamine high
the-the-next lustful lullaby you sing to me
i'll keep your stupid pinky promise
i'll be your sweet catastrophe
& i'll be your shining star
& you keep up trying to be indestructable
cause baby even the best
B
R
E
A
K
CazzaCatastrophe♥
Author notes
I personally don't like this.
I think it's the worst dirty pretty i've written.
Kinda me talking to someone...
'Your Heart Is My Symphony'
Option 1-
Dirty pretty;;; i la-la-love this stuff; i write it myself, and its personally one of my favorite ways to write. Just please, please, please lovelies, don't over punctuate!!! :]
Wordbanks (who doesnt love these things)
You can change the form of the word just keep to the word, if you get what i mean.
1)This wordbank has to be with a dirty pretty write, a minimum of 6 words must be used. :]
Lullaby
Indestructable
Lace
Bruise
Shatter
Break
Whisper
Lie
Promise
Truth
Newsflash
Methanephetamine
Star
Wonderland
Neon
Backseat
Romance
Facade
Your Eyes
Hotel Room
Cheap Sex
A contest entry
- && I'd rather have a b r u i s e d pelvis;; than a //sha tte red\\ ♥ by PaintedParisPassion.
500 points, ended July 19, 2007, 27 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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YOUR WORST DP POEM?! this is incredible!! I'm in LOVEEE. first two stanzas were like heaven in a little glass jar, for freaking real.
[& I'm now officially jealous of your talent.]
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Thanx =]
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btw, what is gawjuz?
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gawjuz = gorgeous
like bby = baby
fwend = friend
teen slang.
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OMG doll;;;
How can you not love this??
ITs ammmmazing!!! srsly. You did such a great job with that wordbank list. wow!!! im majorly impressed!!!!
Darling heres a news flash
to stun your pretty little senses
i could make
break
shatter & bruise you
with the technicolor truth you don't see
but baby i like to see you lost
((i'm in a neon wonderland))
& your nothing but an actor to me
^^that has got to be my favorite part!!!! Good luck, and thanks for entering!!!
♥
:]
Brandee
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not bad, not bad at all. i dont see why you dont like it. i thought it was pretty good if i do say so myself. good luck in the contest
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"Your pretty little facade doesn't fool me
and your eyes laced with fake are clear
your life revolves around pretty little hotel rooms
& cheap sex with over intoxicated
((& over age))
fools in skinny jeans
there just as clueless as you baby
((can't they see the scars??))"
That is my favorite part! The title was magic, it draws you in. Also I like the end line
"even the best break" nice job love, ily ♥
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Hey I like it,youve done well.
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