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an insight to daily life on paper.

Dumb, stupid and dull
Loom gloom, and once a bloom.
Passive unto to the world

My thoughts lay jaggered against the wall.
Dying swans, still, lifeless
Shadows of a soul in an ocean of bleak future
A twisted realty lurks my hopes.

Gaze through entrapped window
Watch time rush aggressively by
Slice aspiration for evermore
Oh how I plead to dream again
Regretful madness descends.

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  • Aussie Dreamer
    July 3, 2007

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    naaw cheer ups daniel its your bday soon a good poem as usual though. keep it up and your so getting majour hugs tommorow.

  • dark ice phoenix
    July 3, 2007
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    k if anyone actually read this, i tried to make as "un-emofied" as posible... just something i wrote down on the bus home from college after a rather, assertive day.