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Ice Cream

Cherry on top
soda smiles
ice-cream laughter
makes anyone joyous

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  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    July 3, 2007

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    Ice cream is the perfect way to chase the blues away. I enjoyed the play on words and the levels of meaning. Nicely written. Peace, Liz


  • FifthDove gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    Heck, it made me joyous just reading it, nice take on the prompt. Best wishes always Dove