In the dewy mist of early morn'
When footsteps are remembered,
I'll collar me a dreamer.
Singing a tune so haunting
That he can't get it out of his wings
A snatch of beautiful notes
Caught in the net of the soul.
Author notes
musing with the dragonflies... ever heard them sing?
Please tell me what you think
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Hmm... I like it.
Ha, gotta love those simple/stupid comments...
At first it felt a little 'dropped off' in the last few lines, but I read it a couple more times, at a different pace, and it was fine.
These lines themselves are amazing:
"Singing a tune so haunting
That he can't get it out of his wings"
Sorry I haven't been a very faithful reader. Been going insane with relationships, and work, and school, and a band. Soooo, I think I have fair excuse. I'll try to be better about it though.
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allura
it's okay, sweety. i haven't been on much either. obviously, i just got your message. take care and stay in touch.
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'kay loves.
Hope you are well...
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Thi is different for you - sorry I haven't replied to your message, usual excuse, busy busy busy. Will do though.
I liked this, not as free and a litle more self aware perhaps, but good, you did well here.
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Hop
no problem.
you're right. i felt compelled to write something but couldn't get into a flow.
moving stuff and unpacking boxes have stunted my creativity.
reading this again...ick... it needs to be rewritten.
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a dreamer...
This is a lovely poem! I really like the word choices and the beautiful imagery they evoke!
Love the last line poet!
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arafura
Thanks for giving this a read.
will be bye for a looky-loo at some of your work soon.
i wonder if my net is big enough?
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