Indian paintbrush smeared brave red,
wild sweet william, marsh marigold,
blue lupine and herbaceous grass
genuflect
to the benevolent sun.
Joyce Josephson
Author notes
Phrase Prompt - "Wildflower Wishes"
In a list
A contest entry
- Pay It Forward Options Contest by -Ink Artist-.
700 points, ended July 3, 2007, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest - Quick Pre-write Contest by Nicole Hanna.
300 points, ended July 9, 2007, 39 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Congrats on the Bronze, this is really a wonderful background, it was perfect for your piece
and my pleasure to see...and read Lovely ~Tia
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Beautiful writing. Simple, but striking, with imagery that will last the day for me. This will probably be a piece I visit again before it's all said and done. Thanks for entering my contest, and giving me something to contemplate
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What a gorgeous poem this is and such a tonic on a miserable rainy, wet, windy day (UK summer - legendary!) ... beautifully portrayed and the images leave me gasping for some sunny days ... x
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Wonderful flowery poetry(couldn't resist, lol)
I haven't seen the indian paint brush in years...this is a gorgeous little poem!...congrats on the shiny, too
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congratulations to you
I thought this was gold.....glad to see it up here though.....
Mal -
Gorgeous, vivid write! The hush of wildflower wishes hum between these well executed and imagery rich lines. Lovely work!
~Lori ♥
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Thank you so much, Lori! Coming from you, this means a lot!
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Very beautiful and vibrant piece. Amazing imagery and brilliant wording. Best wishes to you in the contest.
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Such Splender
spills from you words...beautiful all around..your page compliments your words wonderfully...love what you have written...
Mal
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awwwww butiful and the background matches it well
xxx cheeky xxx
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Oh this is just so gorgeous. The imagery is fabulous and that last line brings it so alive
All the best with this
Gaylene
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Excellent
Very visual and powerful. Best wishes in the contest.
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This background is a perfect complement to your lovely words. You can see the blooms reaching for the sun's rays. Good luck in this contest. Peace, Liz
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