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An angel with pings

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My pings are wilting with the night
My peach is splurred and slow
What did that angel say this was?
O~ a drunken peeping show

I did a dance up on that stage
The men were wild and frisky
My pings are drooping lower now
I think from all the whiskey

I tried to flutter off the pole
I tried to float down from the spage
But I landed on an old bald head
When I fell out of that cage


I pointed straight, well… kind of straight
To give him angel hair
I missed and hit a jug of wine
And it burst into a flare

The barroom now was blazing fire
The people creamed and ran
I’m sitting here all by myself
With pings that need a fan

My pings are wilting with the night
My peach is splurred and slow
What did that angel say this was?
O~ a drunken peeping show



Author notes

Mis-spelled words are present in this poem on purpose, ya know, tipsy talk

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  • Dalaney gold member
    July 15, 2007

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    Ha! This is darling!
    I loved reading the words
    dunked in whiskey...Good
    luck in the contest

    Lane


  • queen Greeters member
    July 3, 2007

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    A drunken angel slurring her words you have a great imagination


  • PoetsAngel
    July 3, 2007

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    Oh mY gOd! were you watching me last night??? I adore this piece made me break out in fits of giggles


  • Amera gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    This is brilliant, you did not have to put the explanation in the notes it is obvious. I love this, the meter is on target the image is delightful. Lest of gluck in the contest!

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • The Poetic Angel gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    i love the drunken angel words pings and peach...good luck in the contest sis xxx cheeky xxx

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