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The Sun's Flower

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Born by the lion's head
Under the golden sun
Strong and proud I stand
Alone in groups of one

I'll soak the brightest rays
Tickled fancy as I turn
And face the glowing embers
Of the universal burn

When light begins to fade
A bow, I swiftly take
In gentle sleep for the night
Till morning's sunlight break

A center of attention
Yet to myself, I keep
Find me big and yellow
Russet brown or red hues deep

A provider of essentials
Adding taste or make a treat
My oil is very light,
My seeds, so good to eat

The petals that I wear
Like the lion's mane
Around my smiling face
The presence of a frame

Born under the leo's head
Towards the skies, I tower
From Summer till early Autumn
Find me, a beautiful sunflower

Author notes

Born a leo, I find the sunflower fitting a choice of plant. Their range of deep hues and contrasting colors is remarkably beautiful. And to watch their transformation during a single day is completely amazing.

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  • Legend silver member
    July 17, 2007

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    To have finish below two such pieces is no shame to me.I loved this poem and it justly received its reward in the contest Excellent

  • Legend silver member
    July 7, 2007
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    To see a field of these tall majestic plants is indeed a beauty to behold.I think you have done it Justice with this beautiful poem Good luck in the contest


  • JeannieD Hunter gold member
    July 6, 2007

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    How beautiful! You have framed an incredibly wonderful poem with beautiful images that enhance your vivid descriptions so well. Brilliant write hun! Well done. Best of luck in the contest.

    Jeannie


  • Olivia33
    July 3, 2007
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    I LOVE sunflowers


  • fool no1
    July 3, 2007

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    Wonderful write filled with lovely imagery. A most beautiful flower that would add grace to any garden.You know yourself well.. Excellent....mal


  • Jadon
    July 2, 2007

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    To know oneself!

    Fitting indeed. You have chosen to be the sunflower and it shall be so.
    To stare adoringly at the sun and to reflect it's image on your countenance. Your devotion to the sun as you "face the glowing embers" speaks of your loyalty, warmth and of happiness. Self sufficient, confident, not given to vanity, useful, giving of yourself.
    You have done well poet, in your verse, presentation and thought. I wish you well in your new life. Jadon

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