Pretty little beauty
defiled by poisonous thoughts
Disintegrating smile
her time is running out
slaughtered by the envy
wicked as the wind
candy coated apple
this beauty's most prominent sin
her secrets and her lies
tucked away tight
the curtain of her life
will close itself tonight
wicked witches
and powerful spells
another of this beauty's illusion
her twisted little creatures
seeking out her prince charming
the enclosure of glass
another of her evil concoctions
her prince, he knows
no good can come of her
her beauty fades
as the time ticks by
the delicate features disappearing
and her wickedness resides
a glass coffin her home
for the deeds she has done
there will be no fairy tale ending
for this devious one
Author notes
6. Snow White.
I apologize that it sort of rhymes if you want to DQ it for this I understand but there's no harm in trying.
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Comments
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i am in love with this. amazinggg.
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i loved these lines:
her twisted little creatures
seeking out her prince charming
the enclosure of glass
another of her evil concoctions
keep up the good work.
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this poem tis very beautiful and i love it♥ good job hon!
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I enjoyed this. It is one of those pieces that just kind of flows through the mind. The only suggestion I have to make is that you have used the word "devious" twice and I think it would flow better if you used a different word. If you cannot think of one there is a thesaurus here.
Thank you for a lovely piece.
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You were right and as i was writing it I attempted to come up with a substitute but at the time I could not but now I have changed deviant to twisted hope you enjoy it!
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