This is spontaneous
Written on a whim
No set direction
I'm just flowing
Flowing
Ever moving
Never stopping
Always changing
That's what I do
Thinking of things as I go along
No rhyme
No reason
Just being
Being myself
Seeing life as it is
Gray
Shades
Never just black and white
There's always something else
Something more
It's never just as it seems
Just like me
To know me on the surface
Is to know nothing
Nothing about me
I am a puzzle
Still missing pieces
Can you find them for me?
I don't know where they are
Can you help me?
Something so hard to say
So hard to ask for
Help is what I need
But where do I turn for it?
Can I trust those around me?
Yes.
No.
Who knows but God?
I ask these questions
These things as I move
Move and groove
Just like running water
In a babbling brook through life
That's what I do
I move
I flow
No rhyme or reason.
Please tell me what you think
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i loved it Alyssa, Aurielle has 2 reread it cause she asks what ur intention was, when the peom is freakin called "Spontaneous"
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it sounded not sincere. It sounded almost fake but the voice of this was that of very humorous like a mimic. I don't know but perhaps reread it because i didn't gain what your intention was.
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This poem has a very wierd flow to it
As most poems do, when they come on whims.
So I wouldn't call it beat poetry, but more like off-beat thoughts of a bitmap or something. twascool.
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Very interesting. Stream of consciousness is always fun, definitely when it's so unorganized.
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Random but not
it's nice. I tend to freewrite like this alot. But I never post them on here because I never really feel like people will enjoy my present thoughts. i enjoyed reading your thoughts and they say alot to me. This is a great poem and I hope you write more like this. -
Interesting
When I do that my husband says I am babbling. But to me it makes a lot of sense its just that he didnt start listening until I was almost done. -
Haha...love it...it's amazing what can happen if you just drift away and write instead of concentrating deeply on every word. It's like a poem about trying to write a poem.
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Ha! Very nice. It is amazing what can come out when you don't think too hard about it and just let your creativity flow. I think this is a great way to learn more about yourself cause what you truely think and feel in it's rawest formatt comes out when you don't rationalize it.
Nice poem, Brilliant idea, write from the heart.
V.
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