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Footprints

A thousand beaches
  Embraced by waves
    And lit by twinkling stars

Capture reflections
  In themselves
    Two lovers leave their scars

Author notes

prompt: footprints in the sand
20 words

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  • Rossetti
    July 18, 2007
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    Lovely! This poemis simple and most effective. I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Chris.


  • Frodofan
    July 4, 2007

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    The way you formatted this reminded me of waves lapping at the shore. Nicely done. I like the simplicity of it.

  • quakietree
    July 3, 2007
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    Nice rhythm and flow. Good imagery.
    qt


  • StormGoddess Greeters member
    July 2, 2007

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    Beautiful!
    Great take on the prompt. Nicely done!
    Thank you for entering and good luck in the contest.

    Stormul!

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