Christ, the answer to all,
older than the rocks,
newer than each spring's thaw.
His words, His mantra,
inspired affirmations,
liquid, flowing, divine magma.
Each breath used to speak,
each draw of pen to quill,
secures His passionate streak.
He set the stars unto the sky,
master of times's time-line,
an artist with mankind in mind.
To each ocean's surge and flow,
His masterful hand holds it all,
no drop of foam falls without His know.
The beauty of His divinity,
through His words or actions,
are beyond human reality.
He opens the door to eternity,
yet leaves the choice open,
then paints our world with His sincerity.
(c) Debby Sorensen Carlson
7/02/2007
r/w - 5/20/08
A contest entry
- Eternal Newness - a quote inspired poetry contest by thelordreigns.
450 points, ended July 6, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This is a stunning piece of writing here. Full of Hope, love, compassion. It flows really well and describes Christ in such a stunning way. Well done for this.
Wayne
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Wayne
Thank you very much Wayne.. Blessings. Debby
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Congrat on the win, this wonderful spread of god's words are inspiring and filled with love and hope through his grace of mercy... Thanks for sharing the word with me and God bless you...
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darryl
Thank you Darryl and God bless. Debby
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Congrats on your trophy my friend. This poem is very inspiring and uplifting. Thank god for the gift that he gave you to spread the word of his truth...
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darryl
Thank you very much Darryl.. God bless, Debby
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wonderful write, may \God walk at your shoulder,,God bless Eddy
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buggles
Thank you very much !! G0d bless. Debby
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Beautifully written! Your words hold a certain power, and this poem was truly captivating. While I can't say I believe in Christianity, I can say that this was indeed excellent.
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antigonelives
ThAnkyou very much !! Blessings. Debby
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He is our all-in-all
When I read this poem aloud it sounds like the waves splashing on the rocks.
The form of the rhyming tiolets is beautiful. Your words are delicate and elegant and inspiring. Your imagery is wonderful - "To each ocean's surge and flow,/His masterful hand holds it all,/no drop of foam falls without His know."
He is as old as the rocks as as new as the foam. He is our everything now and forever more.
Thank you for entering such a profound piece. I am truly honored and amazed at your talent.
Love and hugs always
- jo
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JO
Thank you so much. I am truly glad you enjoyed this piece. Also, thank you for the honorable mention. God bless. Love and hugs, debby
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Thoughts
though not religious I can honestly say I admire those of faith. especially in todays world. this is a wonderful tribute to your faith
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Bob
Thank you. Now, while I've got your attention.. can I convert ya ? Lol.. Seriously, I am glad you enjoyed this piece. And, it is my faith that keeps me going. Blessings, Debby's
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Oh wow. This was all from a quote? This was truly beautiful. I am glad you and God have such a great realationship, well, it doesnt so much portray it, but wow. Inspirational. I haven't been able to write a poem about Him in this manner, this is amazing. Your words speak truth. Good luck, but it looks like a winner to me.
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Thankyou very much ! God bless. Debby
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very good write i hope to read more of your poems if time permits keep up the good work.
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Poetboy
Thank you so much for you lovely comments. God bless. Debby
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