"This isn't what you think",
tumbled from my mouth.
My heart began to sink,
heading straight down south.
His eyes like red hot coals
burning through my skin.
Knowing i'd been told
Not to do this thing again
I stammered and i studdered
i felt my face grow red.
Nothing i could have muttered
nothing i could have said.
He'd caught me dead to right,
without an alibi
My knees both shook with fright,
he wanted to know why?
I searched my heart and soul,
to answer this one thing.
See....
Even though I'm old,
Chocolate's still my thing!!!
A contest entry
- This Isn't What You Think!!!! by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 3, 2007, 18 entries
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How could you!?
Good work.
I like it.
Bravo.
Good luck.
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That's how I feel when I get caught holding chocolate in my hand! LOL Nice job! Thanks for entering my contest
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lol i like this poem at first i thought it was talking about sex but in the end it was CHOCOLATE! i love chocolate, its wonderful i love this poem good luck in the contest
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Thank you....i am so glad you enjoyed it!
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LMAO! Loved it! My words would not do this one justice at all, suffice to say it was brilliant
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roflmao
Wow, I was so not expecting that twist! I loved how you made it so you were doing something really bad then all of a sudden it's chocolate! ~Giggles~ You are an amazing poetress!
Keep the ink flowing and the pen scratching!
Always,
Tatianna
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Rewards are rewards.
Still I laugh to see the child sing.
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haha Lol gosh dont I understand this poem In a way lol I LOVE IT !!!
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Superb!
Had me hooked right to the end!...loved the humour in this write!...simple but superb!
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Oh this is just too cute!
I LOVE this!
Thank you so much for sharing and for being a part of the contest!
This is cool!
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