To tired to love
Because the love has ran dry
There is no reason for such things
Anymore
A futile mission in happiness
Always returns
To beat me down
Everytime
Patience loses its luster
And runs wounds across flesh
Bleeding not red
But black
The fulfillment does not exist
Only in dreams can I find
Someone who loves
Someone who cares
I will get older
Things will change
I may be loved
Someday
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That is how I used to feel but I don't feel like that anymore. I hope you do well in my contest and thanks for entering. Love and Peace!
-Jess
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BEAUTIFULLY SAD
MY DARLING SISTER YOU ARE LOVED AND BLESSED WITH FINE ABILITY FOR POETRY I AM ESPECIALLY FOND OF
"PATIENCE LOSES ITS LUSTER
AND RUNS WOUNDS ACROSS FLESH
BLEEDING NOT RED
BUT BLACK"
KEEP PENNING YOUR HEART!
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Thank you very much!
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Awe this is indeed a beautiful poem
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Thank you dear Mjith.
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This is sad. I am not sure how it fits with my picture but the write is really good. I can relate. At times I don't even want to know the cruel word love at all. But it is a heaven and it is a hell. Well done.
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Confusion, uncertainy, and loneliness could be viewed as my hell. The acceptance that things are the way they are and to take things in stride is my glimpse of heaven. I feel like the poem in itself is an oxymoron. I'm glad you liked it. Take care.
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I like it a lot It has passion and touch of darkness in it thank you for sharing this
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Your welcome, and thank you for the comment! I'm glad you like it!
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Very dark to me - but yes, I relate this - a lot right now, thank you for this entry
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Thank you for your comment
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To tired to love <--- 'too'
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Bleeding not red
But black
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Wow!
I love this poem and the setup of it, it really goes along a train track! The last few lines are great as well, I love this poem and wouldn't change a thing!
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Thank you very much!
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Oh yeah...this is definetly a poem from the heart...and those types I think are the best ones...first off let me say like I've told some of my friends and myself over and over again...in order to succeed and grow as a person in this life you have to feel pain and sadness and heartache...it sucks but it creates wonderful people I believe...maybe I said that wrong...anyways...I loved this poem and I know you will be loved...I'm sure your loved right now...it may not be the type of love your looking for but don't ever take it for granted...great poem...thank you very much for entering and good luck
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First time a judges words sounded heartfelt...Thank you for that.
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"Patience loses its luster
And runs wounds across flesh
Bleeding not red
But black
The fulfillment does not exist
Only in dreams can I find
Someone who loves
Someone who cares
I will get older
Things will change
I may be loved
Someday" I love this poem. It's great, btw those are my favorite lines! I can totally relate to this poem. If you ever need to talk just message me! Oh and I'm not just being nice because it's your birthday! Happy birthday!!!
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Thanks my dear
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No problem.
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This is awesome and never give up my squishy
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Thank you my squishy
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your welcome squishy
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Great Poem. Can feel the negative yet still willing to live attitude, the 3rd stanza was my favourite great imagery done there
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Thank you very much cordova.
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Hmm, something we share dear Hannah...falling in love with written characters of the best, and that of dreams our minds wish for.
As for being loved...you have your friends' love...i know it's not the same, but for now let it allow you to live.
Like wine we age but with age comes value.
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That was a very lovely and thought provoking comment. Thank you very much.
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