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Just a little bit closer...

I went to see my dearest of friends.
It got a bit late, and we laid on the bed.
Never too close with us, I moved just a little bit closer.
And I flashed my smile, the one she adores.
Then I heard her giggle, showing me she was having fun.
I reached out to tickle her, but it turned into a caress...
Her hand ran down my back, leaving trails of goosebumps...
So I traced my hand so lightly across her waist.
God, her skin was like satin...my boyfriends is so rough.
Her eyes held this look, of intrigue I think...
As her lips nervously grazed mine, as if testing the waters.
I'm still not sure, I only know I was flustered myself.
Next thing I knew our tounges were dancing,
Wrestling with each other for control.
My hand moved up as hers moved down,
Stroking parts so similar to mine, exploring her body.
I shuddered as I felt her nipples grow hard,
Suddenly aware at of the fact that my own were as well...
A moan, from me or her I'm still not sure,
You see I felt her finger inside of me just as
I had slipped mine inside of her...
I do know that that next one belonged to me though,
I thought when her teeth found my shoulder I was going to pass out,
The exitement was becoming more than I could bare.
She smiled against my lips as I opened my legs wider,
Needing more, I craved it.
And as she gave me what I wanted I reached up,
Pulling her head backward by her hair I stifled
Yet another moan by biting into her neck,
A satisfied smile crossing my face as she lets out a whine of pleasure.
I rewarded her for that by slipping my fingers deeper into her,
Causing her legs to tremble as she began to reach that point.
We wrestled on, trying to out do each other.
Our legs by then were a tangled up mess,
As our hands sought and found those spots just perfectly.
My back arched and I stifled another moan with a bite to her shoulder,
She returned the favor promptly as at the same time,
We both reached that peak of extacy, our hips grinding together.
I laid there, shivering and covered in sweat,
Our muscles relaxing as nails turned into fingertips.
I locked eyes with her for but a second,
As we grew just a little bit closer.
And then an unmistakable me.
"Ditch the men, you're spending the night tomorrow."

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Counter Point for Old Friends New Things by tKira Maloran.
http://allpoetry.com/poem/3140262

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  • light insight silver member
    July 11, 2007

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    Sexy

    A girls gotta do what a girls gotta do! This applaude the both of you. It is this type of expression that helps us guys come up with new ideas. I'd be happy just to watch!


  • Jehdin tal Darasin
    July 2, 2007

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    LOL..okay, counter point and one, you win!
    Damned hot!
    *pushes you over to make room in the cold pool.*


  • coffeeangel316
    July 2, 2007

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    I think you did such an awesome job with this one. It is hot and sensual very erotic. very great write. keep penning.


  • sheltered
    July 2, 2007

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    Nice rejoinder. I think this one turned me on the most so far but it i'd have to read them all at once to be sure. Could be just the mood i'm in right now. Anyway great write. Really steamy.


  • Trust Calvaire
    July 2, 2007
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    WOW!!!talk about hot hot HOT!!! i really enjoyed this..well done...

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