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Beyond the French Doors

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I hear the birdsong
as finches and sparrows
line up to take turns on
my Yankee Droll feeders.

My two Goldens wait
for me to come and join them
knowing that a game of fetch
is a sure thing.

The squirrels wait patiently
on the shag-bark hickory.
They know the Goldens will leave
and then it will be their turn
to eat the left-over seeds
the birds spilled on the grass.

My patio pots sit basking
in the sunlight - rainbow
colored inpatients,
pinkish purple coneflowers,
shasta daisies and more
all grow strong on my deck.

The scents from fresh lavender,
sweet basil and geranium seep
in through the screen door.

In the distance, the tomatoes
and squash plants are protected
in their fenced-in garden.

But in the woods a small chipmunk
is healing. She lost a race with
the baby Golden this afternoon
and I had to carry her beyond the dog's
boundaries so she could heal
and gain back her strength.

Outside my French doors is
a wondrous display of God's
goodness and His attention
to the smallest of details.

 

I am so blessed to have all this

beyond my French doors. 

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  • davidwright silver member
    June 15, 2008

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    Very nicely done and a great picture of your dog at the onset. Thanks for the entry and happy trails


  • Sherry gold member
    July 4, 2007

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    I enjoyed this a lot Jo its a refreshing and beautiful read

    it felt like springtime reading it lovely. ♥


    • thelordreigns gold member
      July 4, 2007
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      Thank you sweet Sherry. Sometimes I forget how really wonderful God has been and continues to be to me.


  • Gods child40 silver member
    July 4, 2007
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    you are such a great poet!! i enjoy reading your work


  • Malabu
    July 3, 2007

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    Oh Joanne

    such beauty and images spill in my mind and as your heaven appears before my eyes...I can only bow to its splender...truly you are blessed with such grandeur and blessed ever so more with the talent to exprss the heaven you have at your door
    love this writing...
    Mal


  • penquinpoet
    July 2, 2007

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    So Refreshing

    Like a cold drink on a hot day this poem says it all.
    I seem to have lost all that I wrote somehow so I will try again.
    My favorite line is the last line. It flows so well from one frame to another like a video diary of your backyard.

    Like sun that filters through the trees at sunset, it touches so leaves brightly and other leaves just a tad - so they sparkle as they move with the wind. This poem does all of this by having the good things with the less pleasant it makes it zing.

    Better quit before I lose what I wrote again.

    Loved it.

    Penquinpoet


  • debilynn gold member
    July 2, 2007
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    what a lovely backyard you have. thank you for entering and sharing this. God bless you always

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