the air
is sulfur
and weeps:
a weather-torn flag
A contest entry
- 4TH of July Quickie/ 10 words. by jasminerose.
450 points, ended July 2, 2007, 8 entries
Honorable mention
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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Very well written good luckss :]
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I love this! Ten words! Great! There are political tones here that make me know that it's time for a change. Excellent! Congrats on winning an honorable mention!
Much Love ♥
Renee
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Thankee much, Renee. 'Preciate your time.
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I'm flipping out
Bush pardoned Libby. Sure does smell bad.
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As I am not much for political anythings, I am glad this still speaks for you. Subjectivity. Y a y.
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Weathered-torn flags should be replaced! And your thoughts you have shared from the prompt given are a reflection of the rights we hold today!!
Thank you for entering our contest!!!
Jasminerose
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Sadly the air is filled with sulfur though it is actually harmless to all and the environment...and sadly I have seen weather torn flags that should be replaced, but this is America and we have the right to do just about anything! Thank you for your entry, Ken IBT
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