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Seductress

You call me your seductress,
Does it make you feel better?,
Thinking you have no control,
Taking your choice away.

Yes I tempt you with my love,
No I do not want to let go,
I'll Seduce you best I can,
Dig deep inside my soul,
Do you wish this to be the last time?,
Give in to me,
Taunt me with your faithful love.

You act as if you feel bad,
As if each yes brings you farther from no,
In deed if you truly loved her,
Being with me could not be so easy,
I hold back to see,
You jumped on top of me.

Your lips pushed against mine,
You have been wanting it all this time,
One look at me and you give in,
One touch from you and I'm your slave,
Who is seducing who?,
I am drunk with desire,
We are meant for each other,
Give in to Us,
Take faith.

Yes I tempt you with my love,
You taunt me with your faithful self,
Push me away,
As you draw me in,
Goodbye is evident.

I'll take what I can get,
I lie back and take it,
You give all that you have,
Not enough to hold on to,
Just enough,
That I still yearn.

You call me your seductress,
I call you my prince,
I used to be your princess,
Yet now all you give is taunting me,
Calling me your seductress.

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  • aceray
    July 26, 2007

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    I loved this line, "Taunt me with your faithful love." This is a beautiful line! To me I get the impression that the man is someone who falls for your beauty but not your heart. That even a faithful man will see you, give into his desires and then eventually say goodbye. This is pattern is so great that even YOU start to think that maybe this is the norm and you give into just being a 'moment girl' instead of 'lifelong partner'! If I am wrong than I have missed the point completely! Back to school for me! Still a nice write!

    Rey

  • GreatWhiteHunter69
    July 5, 2007

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    Beautiful

    very,very,very seductive.... I feel like i have been seduced already. Its was amazing how you described how you will do anythind for the love of your life.


  • theredcatjazzoflove gold member
    July 3, 2007

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    very well seductive... just the thought of a woman laying back letting the lover in our life make us weak and surrendered is a passion every woman are man should love and take pride in ~ lady enthralling ~