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dont cry

hush now donrt cry
for i will take care of you
with a gentle hand
i'll take away all the pain
only to see that beautifull smile
so stop crying
i hate seeing you
lost and alone
like a child without a blanket
i will try and wipe all your tears
please let him go
the one that cuased you this pain
the one that cuased the tears
for he cuased you pain within your eyes
please dont cry

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  • bleeding insideout
    July 17, 2007
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    Wonderfully Jod.

    what have you been up too over summer brake-!


  • Heavenly Angel silver member
    July 2, 2007

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    Awww what a beautifully sweet piece of poetry this is! Being there for someone in their time of need
    A beautiful sharing! Thank you for being a part of the contest! Bravo!


  • Rain-Shot-Rose
    July 2, 2007
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    That is so sweet I must say. Beautiful beautiful.