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She of The Iceni

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           Original Artwork by Renelle Sommerville (Ishtar)



In ancient times, East Anglia was ruled by Celtic kings.

Prasutagus, a warrior king, had female underlings.

Dense forests kept them separate, as well as did the sea,

This tribe who farmed their native lands was called the Iceni.

But trouble brewed for these fine folk from far off to the east,

The Roman emp’ror Claudius despoiled the lands he’d siezed.

His legions ate the English crops, devoured the English meat.

The land stayed safe from outside hordes, the safety bittersweet.

In forty four C. E., the king arranged to take a bride.

As often happened in that day, his wife was from outside.

The lady, Boudicca it seems, quite fit her queenly role,

Tall and strong with long red hair, untainted heart and soul.

Two daughters gave she to the king before his quick demise.

His kingdom shared with girls and Rome, a move he thought quite wise.

But Roman law said diff’rently, no woman could hold land,

Thus Nero took it for himself, then dealt his reprimand.

The kinsmen jailed, the daughters raped, while Boudicca was flogged,

Each outrage burned into her mind and fully catalogued.

The Druids fought defiantly, rebelling one more time,

The Roman might descended there, to turn the land to chyme.

Though beaten and disgraced by Rome, she still remained the queen,

And other tribes supported her, which Rome had not foreseen.

Taxation and oppression, turned to prisoners and slaves,

The Roman swords and lances had put many in their graves.

A temple built to Claudius, the one who had destroyed

The Celtic culture and the land, his legions now deployed.

Angered by a vile attack on Druid’s holy site,

Boudicca then vowed rebell’on, gathering all to fight.

The Trinovantes tribe joined in, along with many more,

At least one hundred thousand strong, they vowed to start the war

To drive the Romans from their land, to take back what was theirs.

Attacks begun, they hoped they’d find the Romans unawares.

‘twas Camulodunum the first, to feel the Celtic ire,

They massacred the people there, and set the town afire.

The Romans, overconfident, had been too negligent,

Their troops spread out and far away, from Coventry to Kent.

Colchester was the next to fall, o’errun by day and night.

Londinium n’er had a chance in this uneven fight.

Barbaric were the Celtic hordes, with Roman head keepsakes,

They killed the Roman women and then skewered them on stakes.

The thousands count at seventy, the bodies filled the streets,

While things looked very bleak for Rome, there’d be no more retreat.

Sutonius, the governor, gathered all his men,

The finest fighters he could find, the thousands numbered ten.

He marched them to a spot which had a forest at their back.

Thus, from one direction only, came the Celt attack.

The Roman swords were short and sharp, prevailing in the fight,

‘gainst Celtic lances far too long, and thus the Celtic plight.

Rank upon rank of Celtic charge fell to the Roman swords,

And soon it became clear to all, they’d slay the Celtic hordes.

Then quickly they surrounded fiery Boudicca’s last force,

And she, when faced with certain death, had only one recourse.

Celtic fam’lies that had come to see the victory,

Now had no way to escape – slaughtered systematically.

Amidst the carnage and the blood, three women did escape,

Avoiding Roman capture and perhaps another rape.

But Rome would not forget the queen, thus she had but one choice.

Her defeat at Roman hands had stilled her queenly voice.

The deadly vile she held in hand would end her earthly life,

Remembered as the warrior queen, and not Prasutagus’ wife.

       Original Artwork by Renelle Sommerville (Ishtar)

Author notes

This is my 11th collaboration with Reni's painting. This time however, I wrote and she painted a picture to fit the poem, rather than me writing about her picture. Her talent is amazing as always and I'm always humbled by trying to write to fit it.

This poem is historical and as true as historical records will allow. I found it to be fascinating.

The form used here is a 14 syllable line modified ballad style.

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  • Suzianne
    September 3, 2008
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    Stunning presentation

    Excellent poem and outstanding illustrations!


  • Ellis gold member
    November 27, 2007
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    Fascinating (a joy to read as always) Marvelous Painting

  • Eusebius
    July 3, 2007

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    An epic and stirring tale well told here, a most ambitious undertaking, indeed! You have done it all most ably and well... the Iceni will live on! bravo... bravo... bravo...


  • xoxohorses13xoxo
    July 3, 2007
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    THAT WAS REALLY LONG BUT REALLY SWEET AND I LOVE THOSE KIND OF POEMS BUT I REALLY ENJOYED THIS 1 GOOD LUCK AND KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK


  • Greaks
    July 3, 2007

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    UNIQUE !!!

    frankly speakin .,...ur style is unique....its beautiful,.,..

    and the way u've put is just loevely ....


    and the ART WORK IS SUPERB!!!!!!!


  • Gone
    July 3, 2007
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    this was brilliant... We al know the story of Boudicca ROUGHLY... but you have put it forward in an interesting, easy to understand, and fun way... without losing the emotion.... it really is a sad life

    any way
    good write
    James


  • katscradle
    July 3, 2007
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    AWESOME

    i think i saw a movie on this subject a couple months back i always did like it and your works as well as the aritsts are phenominal as a matter of fact the movie was after the celtic queen


  • Riftkin gold member
    July 3, 2007
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    This was/is a very intriguing piece. I was able to see the history unfold and yea, I could put my self into the poem and feel like I was there. Thank you very much, for the great written poem,

    Now you have made my job of the best poem even harder.

    Thank you again.


  • suseann
    July 3, 2007

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    Is is fascinating indeed! And a history's lesson I've not heard. So it has enlightening quality.I especially liked the word choices you've implimented in it. Great piece.~Suseann


  • Cannonsfire
    July 2, 2007

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    What a vivid piece of history and society, strong words, great flow and told me a story I was not familiar with and kept me enthralled right to the end. So very well done. Love, C


  • Ishtar
    July 2, 2007

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    Well, this was quite fun!

    This is a wonderful poem, Paul. (As all your poems are). The consistent, steady flow you maintained helped the reader get through with ease. It's like a folk song, telling of a tail. I could just see myself sitting around a fire or something, listening intently to the story of the Great Queen.

    A pleasure!
    Thanks you.

    -Reni


  • no-longer-a-member-
    July 2, 2007
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    A wonderful story-poem, you've really kept me interested in it... and it's history, too!!! I think you've worked a miracle

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