Only you can make me cry.
Only you have seen me smile.
Only you have seen my anger.
Only you have seen me happy.
Only you have kissed me.
Only you have touched me.
Only you have seen me this way.
Only you have said you loved me.
Only you have truly cared.
Only you have my heart.
Only you I love.
Your the only person that was ever there.
Your the one I know who will never leave me.
Only you will save me in the end.
A contest entry
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1000 points, ended July 17, 2007, 34 entries
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Comments
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yes lovers do have the ability to love and destroy us, a very good write. thanks for entering and good luck..
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wow
i like this poem
its cool
i hope the person u wrote it for loved it
keep it up
waterroxie
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I love the last line. It's so strong, and makes the reader want that feeling too.
In the lines:
"Your the only person that was ever there.
Your the one I know who will never leave me."
It should be "you're" instead of "your".
I like what you're saying in this, but the repetition of
'only you' gets a bit too much. If you added some lines between it, I think it would sound better.
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