Painting the invisible
Sharply as she can
a dash of red for hate
she let it run and it ran
Painting purple for love
as it starts and stops in dots
cause thats how love is
and an ugly dim purple for when it rots
painting yellow for nieve thoughts
when you were a child and hope was there
that flutters on this painting
as if to show how much mommy would care
painting blue for sadness
as it falls to turn into white
for hope and people will
to do right
Black for the darkness
that we sometimes find ourselfs in
following the devil
enjoying the sin
painting green for a peace of mind
that is straght through the middle
right near the yellow
from when you were little
orange for passion
that everyone has for somthing
painting the invisible
how with all these colors in life we see nothing.
A contest entry
- Not another titles contest.... by Andu.
450 points, ended July 13, 2007, 15 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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I love this how all the colors have their own meaning and each have a purpose in the rainbow and what it all means to you. True "how with all these in life we see nothing" very true. Great write!
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A very colourful poem! ..which is certainly a feat, since you are painting the invisible! I liked this, certainly emotional and vivid. Well done! Thanks for your entry and good luck!
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wow i like how each color represents something! great work! Definately an eye catcher =]
Jasmine
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