You brushed me aside,
I have no where to hide
from this pain I feel inside.
You are so distant.
Do you know what thats like?
It seems you've scrapped me
like an old bike.
I feel so empty
like I did at the start.
Before you came and took over
my heart.
It's summer now,
the flowers are abloom,
but here I am alone in my room.
Looking out,with thoughts of you,
Will this ever change?
What can I do?
I must be strong,
Season's will pass me by,
All I want to know is
Why?
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I know that feeling far too well. I love how you end it with just the question why. It shows the emotions of being powerless and frustrated. I really like the way you portrayed those feelings in this. Very sad, but good!
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