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Brittany [me]

Brittany is
a person who is lost
unknowing
uncontrollably hopeless
Left without help
Friends deserted me
When I was honest

Every scar has a story
But not every story has an ending
I continue to search
Looking for myself
I seemed to have forgotten
Exactly who I was
Before high school

Now?
I smoke
What a regret
Drinking and drugs
Hidden beneath a mask
Regrets roll off my shoulders
And fall to the pile below

I think I need a slow down
Before I fall down
Flying high without a thought
Tripping now that I'm dry
Sober and alone I crawl to my home
Waiting for the storm to blow over

Author notes

This was hard to write so give me a break!

A contest entry

I just started to write, and this is what I got...

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  • SoftlyScreaming
    July 18, 2007

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    i wish I knew your AP sn (hint hint).. i like you already, so ap mail me sometime soon cause id like to get to know you... you are a really good writer, and the best writes are usually the hardest ones


  • yours to hold
    July 2, 2007
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    wow... this poem really struck my heart when I read it! Thank you for entering!


  • skye101
    July 2, 2007
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    i enjoyed this poem more then some of your others, i liked the "regret falling off my shoulders"