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Fantasy Wars

Claws ripping at each other

The dragon through the black night

The tiger in the white moon's silhouette

Ever circling, ever watching

Ever anticipating the other's moves

Fur clashes with scales

As they pounce once again

Author notes

http://www.bodyzone.net-fun.net/images/dragon_tiger3.jpg

That's the link to the tiger picture I found. I thought it was cool and decided to write about it. That has to be the shortest poem I've ever written, prose or otherwise.

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  • whispernthedark Greeters member
    July 28, 2007

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    I really like the pic you used. Nice write, good luck in the contest.


    whisper


  • Jessica Lyndsay
    July 9, 2007

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    Awsome Great write! Totally capture the essence of the picture!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!! Jess


  • kyle19
    July 3, 2007

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    Hey this is nice! It caught my attention since it was about fantasy. I like fantasy alot especially dragons! Nicely done!

    K


    • lovergirl03279
      July 3, 2007
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      Thanks! I love fantasy things like Harry Potter and stuff. I'm glad you liked the poem!


  • Sesheta
    July 2, 2007
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    This is an awesome poem! I love the use of a dragon as well. Yin and yang, yay. I'd look at the picture, but the library computer won't let me, so when I can I shall re-review with a more contructive and detailed and appreciative point-of-view. Thank you for entering~

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