I stand alone here
a being that cannot trust
will not fall again
you taught me not to
trust anyone ever again
I will not be fooled
All we gain from trust
is the risk of being hurt
broken and shattered
You did hurt me...once
but never again will I
make that same mistake
trust only brings pain
for when that trust is broken
tears fall and dreams break
along with my heart
my trust is broken in two
both halves are shattered
so thankyou for this
showing me that trust is for
the naiive. not me.
Author notes
im not sure if i think this poem is as good as some of my others, however i did my best x
A contest entry
- This Isn't What You Think!!!! by Heavenly Angel.
475 points, ended July 3, 2007, 18 entries
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The best line in this is 'tears fall and dreams break' the most truth i've heard in a while. Will point out that thankyou is two words so may want to quickly adjust that, overall you covered your emotions and showed how you feel which is all poetry asks of you, you should never put yourself down when trying to sell yourself either!! lol. (author notes)
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Wow i can really relate to this, and i like how your style lets you put your feeling right out there in the open, in plain words it's amazing
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i like this one
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Sentiments well expressed in these line; once bitten, twice shy - it is hard to trust anyone again when one has been hurt badly before.
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I personally have had trust issues in the past so I can fully relate to this write
I think it's well done; it's pure and honest
Wishing you the best; thank you for sharing
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