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Colors Unwound

Tingling sensations

    

     of rich sapphire

 

           radiant,

                

                shimmering and

 

                      sensational. 

 

 

A truly outstanding pigment, azure.

Author notes

It's option 1 because some people don't know what I'm talking about... lol. You might be able to get it right away maybe, I'm not sure, but I'm willing to take the chance and make it option 1! ☺

Ok, for the new contest, It's option 7. (Describe a color)

Ok, newest contest lol it is option 3.

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  • bananasfoster42
    August 2, 2007

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    awesome poem. (please be sure to specify which option for my contest cause i was a little confused on that.)thanks for entering


  • x-Black-Butterfly-x gold member
    August 1, 2007

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    this was beautifal and for a short poem aswell.
    it was descripttive and full and gave the colour a whole new light.
    this was beautifal
    well done and best of luck


  • Ms Raneika
    July 7, 2007
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    Aw this is so beautiful! I'm glad of your entry!
    Love, Raneika


  • DeepDarkDesire
    July 7, 2007

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    Good imagery

    It lacks emotion, but it presents amazing imagery. This reminds me of a haiku-too short for my liking. I will give you this though: It's fantastic and I couldn't do better.

  • Nicole Hanna
    July 6, 2007

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    Cool. I like poems about colors. For some reason, though it's directly about a color, it seems to incite a specific emotion response. Then again, if you have any belief in color therapy, it's no wonder. Many thanks for your entry in my contest.


  • sleepingINblackRain
    July 4, 2007
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    Amazing imagry

    This is a very fresh poem. The choice of words with the imagery you weaved was amazing. I liked it very much, unfortunatly i'm still not sure i know what your talking about. Are you just breaking down a color into it's beauty? This poem was very relaxing. Thanks for entering
    Never stop writeing


    • kiwikrazi37
      July 4, 2007
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      First of all, thank you so much second, I did write it initially because the prompt was 'blue', but then as I thought about it, I came to picture a lake, stream, waterfall, what ever you want it to be lol.


  • Angel With No Halo
    July 3, 2007

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    as a comment to the person who said this was only 14.. it IS in fact 15.. but I dunno if you fixed it or not..

    as for the write itself.. I liked the use of all the different colors and shades of blue. I love this. Very tranquil and relaxing.. a calm waterfall on a tiresome night.. ahhhhh... *sinks into her chair* Thank you for entering and good luck!!

    ~Krys~


  • Macey Muse
    July 2, 2007

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    Thank you for your entry, but I'm sorry that I can't consider it as you've used the wrong number of words


  • Macey Muse
    July 2, 2007
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    This is only fourteen words ~ would you like to edit?


  • Macey Muse
    July 2, 2007
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    Prompt posted

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