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Soulmates

Seperated by earth
Forbidden by time
Entwined in soul
Hearts are aligned
Destiny still as one
Captured in unity
Eternally connected
Spirit and mind
Soulmates

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  • Eyes Wide Shut gold member
    September 1, 2008

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    I was just looking through your old poetry and I really like this it's short and sweet and to the point, a beautiful point, might I add. Good job.


  • HeavenScent4U
    November 2, 2007

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    Separated by earth but I believe only for a time for it is in coming back that they find each other again. Forbidden by time? Maybe this time around but like I said, I think we always find our way back to our soulo mates through multiple times and I believe we recognize each other every time, we just don't remember the time before I do however believe that it is a bond that can never be severed Very well done and I can't believe this doesn't have some kind of shiny on it be well and be blessed

  • TwilightsChild
    July 6, 2007

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    wow...i really enjoyed this...its so...captavating? is that the word i'm looking for? lol like you'd know what's in my mind...i don't know its very well written and grabs at what a soul mate truly is...the words create a vision all their own of two lost lovers searching endlessly for each other...i haven't viewed the contest so i don't know really what's what with it but just the descriptiveness in this is amazing...ok well yeah i'm done rambling...later...


  • EternitysLastWish
    July 4, 2007

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    Hey, loving the rhyme scheme! It's quite clever in the way it works. A lovely piece of work with a great deal of sentiment - well done.

    ELW x


  • redradical
    July 2, 2007

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    Great work, Helen. You did an amazing job for your first quickie. Even better is how much you drew from the pic and did all this in such a short time. I think you're gonna do great at these if you do more.

    -Ryan

  • Aurora Ceres
    July 2, 2007

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    The first four lines of this are so so grabbing. I've often felt that way about soulmates. Thank God some of them find each other again. Maybe they all do? Dunno. This is a wonderful take on prompt. Thank you for entering and best of luck to you.

    Bella


  • Whoochi gold member
    July 2, 2007
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    well done...good luck in contest

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