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Live Without Them

Have You Ever
Skipped A Breath
And Closed Your Eyes
And Seen Their Face
In Front Of The Sky
And Felt The Taste Of
Your First Kiss
That Made You Realise
Your Life Is
Incomplete
Without Them?

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xMx

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  • DancingRed
    July 3, 2007

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    Beautiful piece. I'm not too sure about capitalising the beginning of every word - any particular reason for that?
    Anyhow, it doesn't stop the heartfelt emotions from being expressed.
    Thanks for entering.
    DancingRed.