I need a subservient windstorm
Genuinely strong, yet vulnerable,
Eager to be resolute enough
To take being broken.
Genuflecting at my feet
Takes greater fortitude
Than the lashing put upon her.
on her knees
she will be a goddess
of servitude and exploit
to your fervent Sir.
Forcible tugs of the hair
Welting slaps of the ass
With vigor and awareness
She cringes and craves more
Punishment and Dominance
Control and Submission
All given and taken
Between two amazing souls
Both resilient
Both frail
Both bind together seamlessly
Author notes
If you know what this about, no explanation is needed and you now know a bit more than you wanted to know about me
If you don't know what this is about, sometimes that can be a good thing.
Not a perfect write, but it was something on my mind and got me out of my dry spell.
A contest entry
- What is your fantasy? by Sinfully Yours.
1000 points, ended July 11, 2007, 14 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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This shows two sides of you though one is obviously more 'dominant' than the other. I really enjoyed reading this and it gave me something to ponder upon.
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This is defintely up my alley. Enjoy a swat on the ass every now and then. My boyfriend calls me his winch, hence my AP name. Really enjoyed this write.
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Excellent
This is right up my alley. Wonderfully done and very beautiful. -
woaa damn...shouldnt of came here....on my way to the exit sign,..,damn what the hell im already here, this was a woooaaa ass write. Sorry. I mean this was a very well penned piece and exactly up my alley.*giggles* i mean the write. Very vewry good. Thanks fo rmking my night...need to head to bed...well maybe in a few...keep it up.. loved it.
Tory
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Wow
A stimulating write.
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A good write, and lucky is the person who finds their other half, sometimes it feels like an endless search. Good luck in the contest!
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ahheemmm..lol.
This has a different feel to it, then some of your other work..I like it.
"Eager to be resolute enough
To take being broken"
love that line.
Excellent work..nothing resembling dry in here.
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Good
Not into what this about, but it is a good write. I ahven't written in forever myself, so I know how it is to be rusty, but your rust is minor.
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